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[Material Engine (Materia)] Reizoku no Kubiwa Akogare no Rikujoubu Senpai o Toraete Jibun no Konomi ni Sennou Choukyou | I Claimed my Beloved Track-and-Field Senpai and Brainwashed her into my Perfect Woman [English]

[マテリアルエンジン (マテリア)] 隷属の首輪 憧れの陸上部先輩を捕らえて自分の好みに洗脳調教 [英訳]

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Posted:2024-11-27 10:16
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Language:English  TR
File Size:79.68 MiB
Length:92 pages
Favorited:2906 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.43

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Posted on 27 November 2024, 10:16 by:   weedlayer    PM
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A promising new artist, a definitely an interesting take on the genre. In this one, brainwashing a woman and turning her into a sex toy is treated more like an expression of love than the typical "revenge plot" you see. Honestly, I really get it, but I imagine it'll miss the mark for some people.

As always, please post any mistakes in the comments, and I'll fix them as soon as I can.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 10:34 by:   IvanZ    PM
Score +58
I do appreciate this work, but IMO the best part of Mind Control/Hypno fetish is the fact the victim does not understand they are being taken advantage of. If the girl is okay with being mind controlled, that point is kinda lost
Posted on 27 November 2024, 11:01 by:   MoonSttar    PM
Score +839
Not to mention that despite her being ok with everything and loving him he still went with turning her in a sex doll. Like wtf shit wasted ending is that. You got your perfect girl whos now your wife doing everything you want and loving it and you and the best thing you can think of is turning her into a sex doll? go buy one if you want a emotionless sex doll. such a dumb and wasted potential ending. at least if they would have cut the confession part it would have made more sense but with that it makes no sense.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 11:15 by:   weedlayer    PM
Score +196
Honestly, I took the sex doll thing as more temporary play than a permanent state of being, though that's just my personal interpretation. I guess you can see it either way.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 11:49 by:   xyg9449    PM
Score +78
I appreciate that this has an actual plot, but I feel like it does a bit more tell than show.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 12:03 by:   markiño    PM
Score +223
The use of the necklace in the end was unnecessary, the girl was already his out of pure love.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 13:59 by:   Renocraft    PM
Score +37
why is the dude doing an ahegao face?
Posted on 27 November 2024, 14:04 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +111
She wanted him to take advantage of her after that.
She's conscious under the mind control.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 14:06 by:   Foruolo    PM
Score -2
Men, I would not mind seeing the twink getting fucked.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 17:38 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +323
: Dude got the ace of jumping high athlete whom acept you with anything without mind control anymore.

: Reduce her to just being mindless sex doll and lower intelligent and probably can't do anything by herself again.

This one got skill issue to me.
Posted on 27 November 2024, 23:45 by:   Ahegaosensei    PM
Score +29
Just because you don't need to brainwash your partner into.a mindless sex doll doesn't mean you shouldn't (and she clearly wanted it too).
Posted on 28 November 2024, 03:30 by:   Arsel    PM
Score +171
It starts with profiles of three girls, and then 2/3 get basically no content.

Why even bother?
Posted on 28 November 2024, 12:17 by:   Quartafeira11    PM
Score +10
did... did she commit suicide by brain wash?
Posted on 28 November 2024, 15:38 by:   guyman1337    PM
Score +32
Doesn't meet the criteria for the pregnant tag.
Posted on 29 November 2024, 06:41 by:   dynamo1134    PM
Score +33
The girl wanting the mind control to continue is a rare and valuable trope that I hope we see more of!
Posted on 01 December 2024, 11:55 by:   ManInARobe    PM
Score +36
I've read guys opinions here, but for me the ending was an icing on the cake, and without it the ending would feel much more boring and cliched. It adds some betrayal notes, some spiciness of girl's complete conquer. That even tho she fell into him, he decided to transform her into a mere pleasure object. I liked the comic and hope to see more series ahead.
Posted on 19 December 2024, 15:31 by:   apary_hobby    PM
Score +31
I feel like ending on a wholesome note could have been more impactful considering that the protagonist did all of those lewd things to her out of a posessive expression of love, the path to heaven is made out of selfish intentions.

This feel like the author wanted to put more scenes but had to cut out a lot of content to finish yet 80 pages is a lot for a MC doujin. This story tooks its time to start with the MC and even explained a lil bit instead of just jumping into it which is respectable, i could feel the excitment of finally getting into the part where the girl gets controled. It may feel slow at the beginning and the guy narrating his actions in paralel may feel like one is getting blueballed from half of what is happening between scenes of longer transition.

I loved the text boxes with the different states of the girl tho i wish he did more with the sex-bot scene, expressionless girl doing hardcore sex is one of the best parts of the hypnosis theme. Also not sex-pet mode sadly, probably due to the lack of time i mentioned before.

Im looking forward to this guy's career as a Hypnosis/Brainwashing fetish focused artist. From what i read in his website it seems he wants to make a prequel about the sister.
Posted on 31 December 2024, 20:35 by:   ron_hayato    PM
Score +7
This is pretty damn good for a first doujin. And seeing as it's listed under a "Reizoku no Kubiwa" series in the author's DLSite, it seems he intends to make more stories featuring this mind control device.
Posted on 10 January 2025, 09:41 by:   Corvux9q    PM
Score +2
Its pretty good
Posted on 26 January 2025, 14:32 by:   fiiban    PM
Score +22
why not put slave collar on the shorter blond girl
what a shame.

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