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Fuck whatever else I was working on, it's Yuruyakatou time. Really love the design of the martial arts trap. I like long hair in a ponytail, it's simple but effective. When you want to be a strong martial artist but you're destined to be a cute girly boy who cums from taking it up the ass. Also, the tags on the raw are fucked up. There's no rape or chikan in this, Rinichi literally asks the fucking guy to take his pants off and check.

I'll be releasing a BA translation next, since I finally caved and opened commissions for them, but after that there will be another very good trap release that I know people will like.

Happy fapping!

RAW - https://eh.makinico.moe/g/4228080/faade8094b/

You absolute legend.
Done the second it came out

My god man. You are the best part of the world.

Gentlemen! Let us feast our perverted eyes upon another Yuruyakatou

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Praise MM3 speed on Yuruyakatou translations, always on point!

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Faster than a speeding bullet!

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2 hours between the RAW being posted and TL going up. Outstanding.

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I didn't expect another work from this artist so soon, not gonna lie, also, nice speed on the translation.

About the story, i must say i'm a little confused, it seems a little rushed, i mean, the boy wanted to be strong but also was horny, the scene in page 8 and 9 was a bit odd with him just taking off his clothes and instantly cumming, does he feel aroused training? but that wasn't shown before tho, and then there is the guy, he has no background except a single page at the end there, then the boy just decides to have sex with him out of the blue...it felt like i needed more pages for setup.

Don't get me wrong tho, it's Yuruyakatou so obviously it was plenty hot and the boy looks amazing, i just felt it was a little too rushed/confusing, but still nice.

Thanks a lot for the translation MM3, it was great as always.

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Maybe I preferred it when he released longer works but with a longer wait; he had more time to tell the story.

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The story does seem a little cryptic, with a lot of show not tell, so I’ll activate my autism and give what I think is a summary. Keep in mind I have no extra information than anyone else; this could all be my headcanon, but I do think it’s accurate. Apologies in advance for the proceeding wall of text.
Rinichi, like most of this artist’s heroine♂ characters, seems to be gay. Not in a “hahaha, you’re so gay bro” kind of way, but actually gay, as in attracted to masculine men full stop. This would obviously be very distracting in a room full of muscular, sweaty men. In addition to that, he wants to be strong, but his body is naturally more feminine and he can’t build any muscle despite training all the time. So with these two things combined, it’s not only difficult for him to focus because he gets horny in the dojo, but even when practicing on his own it isn’t effective because he can’t build muscle. Thus the constant reinforcement of how much he hates his own body. He needs to jack off all the time to relieve himself. Pages 8 and 9 seem to be about him masturbating using his nipples, but he realizes it’s part of his “weakness” and so, after seeing the marker thing pressing up to his butt on the bottom of page 8, clearly meant to represent a penis, he jumps up and runs away only to pull his pants down seconds later on page 9 because that alone made him cum. That’s how weak he is. He tries to spar with the MC (he isn’t given a name so that’s what I’ll call him even though he’s not really the MC) for a finale but stumbles, as usual, and falls down. He asks the MC to help him out, knowing full well he’ll get turned on by the guy because he’s gay, and asks him to pull down his pants and check on his condition because he’s fairly certain the MC guy will be down to fuck due to the same MC calling him girly and fondling his chest years earlier. Rinichi especially saying on page 21 that taking a cock up the ass hurts, but also frees him from his bindings is what made me 90% certain it’s also talking about him being gay and not needing to worry about being a strong man.

Again, this is just my own interpretation because this work is lacking explanation. In fact, I’d be less confident in my ideas if I hadn’t read all the other works by this artist, which I do think is a demerit. If the story is self-contained, you shouldn't need to read other works by the artist/author to understand it. I don’t mind open-ended or cryptic stories in manga, but I agree with others that Yuruyakatou should’ve at least put in some kind of dialogue that linked Rinichi being weak to the sex and the MC he’s having sex with. Rather than feeling rushed, it feels to me like the artist is trying to fit a story designed for their old length of work into a new, shorter work without reformatting it to fit that shorter length. That’s something that can easily be fixed with simple practice though, so I don’t mind the shorter length but quicker pace that much as long as Yuruyakatou improves in that aspect just a tiny bit. I mean literally just a few extra dialogue boxes or maybe one extra page at the very most would do it. I think they'll fix it though because they’re extremely talented as a manga artist. Maybe I’m biased because I like them so much, but I’m not too worried about it.

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@mysterymeat3 First off, thanks for the wall of text, and no worries, i would never be angry when someone is trying their best to explain.
About your summary, while i can understand some things there were some that were a little forced, like the guy liking the masculine men, after all there wasn't a single page showing that or that he gets horny because of the dojo. Page 8 and 9 didn't even feel they happened right after page 7, in the sense that i honestly thought he was training, then was thinking back on the time he fapped and that made him lose concentration and cum to the memory (which also helps with the image of him being too sensitive), after all it would make sense for him to fap, give up, tie his clothing and put his pants on only for them to just remove his pants and cum, it would make more sense if he creamed his pants there. As for the MC i can see that but again it was too rushed, we don't even know the MC, maybe if that final page was put at the start it would feel a little better, also Rinichi just calling the MC was too abrupt, he went from hating to be weak to submitting completely unprompted.

I 100% agree with your comment about the Author failing to fit a longer story in fewer pages, to be honest i even saw that in the previous 2 works of his where while the story was arguably better paced than this it still felt like they could benefit from more pages, especially the tanned boy one.
I trust and like this artist as well, but i will be honest with you, part of what made his stories great was precisely the development, i would like it 100% more if he returned to longer works but more sporadic releases than works like this, and while i agree with you about him improving it still feels bad that such nice settings will most likely never be worked on again (i.e he might improve but the dojo boy, the tanned boy from last work won't have a ''remake'' version)
I trust this author, that's why i'm afraid of losing the stories if he is forced to do faster works.

Thanks a lot for the answer and your point of view, i'm glad i was able to talk about it, i hope my wall text didn't bother you either XD

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@rick-kun
You're very welcome. I just wanted to try and explain what was going on, no anger or anything. I do agree that the MC being gay is reaching, but I think it explains things better if it's true. I'm mostly relying on the artist's previous work and a few lines like the "I'm free" part more than anything. The main issue is definitely that things don't feel connected. It's like stuff just happens, but none of it is linked together. Whether he's worried over being gay or not, if it's just the strength problem, who the MC is, all that. Even pages 8 and 9; I don't think they're flashbacks because the room at the bottom of page 8 is the same room as in page 9 (you can see the same bag in them both), though if the flashback was only the top of page 8 it would be possible. But either way, it has the same problem, the scenes just aren't linked together, neither the change from page 7 to 8 or the bottom of 8 to the top of 9. If it were one of Yuruyakatou's longer works it'd have some pages of him going back to his room, or have him clearly getting into position in his mind, or something to show that it's definitely a flashback or isn't. It's just cuts to some random scene with no explanation. The weirdest one for me was the MC sucking Rinichi's cock immediately after pulling down his pants for seemingly no reason. Do they have a relationship aside from that one flashback scene? Who knows.

I do agree about the setting in these shorter ones being wasted though, that's probably the worst thing about it. Of course, Yuruyakatou could always revisit them, but they never have before so there's no reason to think they will. Like I said, I really don't think it'd be too hard to fix the weird disjointed feeling, all the artist needs to do is add in some more dialogue boxes explaining or connecting things. They're not necessary in a longer work where you can have another 20 pages showing the connection and joining scenes together, but in a 24 page work where space is limited and you can't have 6 pages showing the relationship between characters or whatever, there really needs to be more dialogue explaining things. Imagine a single text box on page 8 that says either "x days ago" or "a few hours later." It would at least frame the scene properly with that one box. I really hope that's how Yuruyakatou's future works go, but we'll just have to wait and see.

Also, I prefer walls of text to something generic like "nah :wilting flower:" or some GenA nonsense, so don't worry about that.

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I love massive cum from Yuruyakatou.

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@mysterymeat3 I agree, it's clear the plot is all over the place, and yeah more dialogue would help (but not solve) the issue honestly, we would need one or 2 extra pages in some places to fully fix it imo, the bad part is that usually authors don't remake doujinshis, i mean, a remake would not get them nearly enough money as a new one after all.
I don't know why the author decided on just making short works, i don't follow them on media so i don't know if there is a reason, but the reason i loved works like his and others like aoP for example is precisely because there is a buildup to the sex, the author makes you care for the characters and fall for them, even if most pages are filled with only sex it still gives you enough in those parts to enjoy, but now this work and the previous one are just all over the place, i honestly hope the artist goes back to longer works and that he revisits this, i don't mind waiting more for peak.

@dgjdgjdgj Agreed, his hot boys covered in cum are amazing, shows how much they loved the sex.

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I think he cums on page 9 because he gets overly excited thinking about his masturbation habits while he's still doing his kicking and air punching exercises. Otherwise I don't really see why he'd be laying down with the marker at his asshole then stand up to pull his pants up then pull them back down to ejaculate on the floor. It's a little incoherent admittedly.

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@superstarfish: yup, he's naked in the masturbation scenes, then spontaneously cums in the dojo as he yanks his shitabaki down to avoid soiling them.

@rick-kun, @mysterymeat3: it's obviously a Marxist parable on patriarchal over-determination caused by leaving things to your children.

Having written a few things, I can say inspiration is all. Yes, authors like Elmore Leonard and Warren Murphy emphasized it as a job, but they point out that sitting down to write 1-3 hours a day tends to call forth inspiration. This story makes me think Yuruyakatou just had a lot of flashes about a femboy in a dojo, and built the story around that. I'm used to the Impressionistic scene attack. Obviously, I wish it were longer, but if Yuruyakatou said all he had to say about this guy, then I prefer he release a shorter work. Also, I love that 10 yo MC may have awakened the trap to his own body.

thanks for the translation, MM3! Great as always!

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