I did the translation before but after upload, I realized that the translation was trash, so this is a better version of it, because i want to put out better works rather than something mediocre.
The version before this was : https://eh.makinico.moe/g/4222678/76bb1362d7/

CUCK ALL VANILLA APES! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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@Leguna I hope you find a loving and faithful partner that doesn't want to cuck you and will stay with you for the rest of your life

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Here's a good tip for beginner, NEVER pick any title from Kairakuten, Kairakuten Beast, Shitshurakuten, Isekairakuten, X-Eros, and Bavel for translation because these magazines are owned by Fakku so there will be a better English translation sooner or later and yours might be gone. Just save your time from doing licensed titles, the sea of hentai doujinshi is vast, buddy.

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Page 19&20 is duplicate.

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Another small piece of advice is that you can just upload new images to your old gallery to make a new version and everyone will appreciate that just the same, unless you are adamant that this one really does deserve its own gallery.
Also be mindful of the "rewrite" that you put in the title, as I am certain it will attract some unneeded (bad) attention from people who are quick to affiliate it with the legend involving some very made up lawn mowing.

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